Farza's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Game Trailer Collab]

Epic.

Its great, what more can I say. You guys were awesome to work with :)

Archawn responds:

Awww Shucks

[jumping turtles]

Turtleco.

Time cops 2 is the best movie ever

Really awesome movie.

turtleco responds:

yes, yes it is.

[Ninja collab 2!]

I'm gonna....

My god. This is not a collab. Its a bunch of horrible animations tied together. This whole collab showed no effort AT ALL. You might as well call it Spam.

None of the parts were funny or animated nicely. Why? Can't you see? Characters losing proportions, people going crazy with the brush tool. Its all just bad.

People in the collab couldn't make a jump animation without losing their patience.

Sounds.
You guys need musical help, some parts had sound, other didn't. It got annoying.

I really don't know what else to say...a collab is something you put TIME and EFFORT into. I looked through all the animator's submissions. Sorry to say, but I would give the same score to ALL of them. So please pend more time on it.

Tell me animators, when you saw this animation, were you proud it? You guys have to have some respect for yourslef and your flashes. Get your act together. If your serious about flash, at least LOOK LIKe your serious through your flashes. If your not serious, your just another Blam of The Day.

lgnxhll responds:

your probly right but it was a fun to work with other animators and i guess we learned from our mistakes, correct?

[Music Lovers 2]

Needs more.

Pretty nice. But mega annoying.

Art:
It was actually pretty nice. Better than your usual. The 5 points is for the art.
All I can say about it mabye work more on making everything except the Chicken move more. The others were pretty boring since they had hardly any movement.

Music:
ANNOYING. You gotta learn to pick nice catchy music for flashes like these cause if the music sucks , the flash sucks. The music should sync with 2 things. The flash and the viewer. Which it did not.

Glitches:
The buttons are extremely glitch. They don't even work. I had to right click and press " Play".

Overall:

It was a Meh movie. Could have been way better. 2/5. 8/10.

Icandraw responds:

thank u for ur review

[JFTC redux]

Well...

Well. Its not horrible. But lemme start

Art
It was pretty bad. It wasn't crazy bad, it just could've been better. The people looked pretty weird. You gotta get you Human Art right. Another reason I'm giving this thing a low score, is the framerate. The gunshot animation was so slow. It took me a while to realize it was a gun shot. Don't get lazy on your FBF. Thats how lots of animators are. They out crazy work into the first 5 seconds, then just get lazy and don't care. So mainly, I'm gonna say be patient with flashes, let it all fall together when it does.Also work on that art ALOT. I gotta feeling you don't have a tablet. If you do, well....no comment.

Music
Really didn't know what they were saying. So the music and the animation didn't sync correctly together.Mabye you could've added subtitles.

PS: don't go crazy with the BRUSH tool. Theirs something called a LINE tool.

someplaceelse responds:

Thanks for reviewing.

line tool is what creates bad art in my opinion. No matter how much it is worshiped by other people, I still think line tool art is bad. :P

I do have a tablet by the way, no I'm not lazy, The FBF took literally hours of work. >:(

The FPS is 24, it syncs perfectly for me. You probably have a slow computer I guess.

[Sticks On A Cliff]

Well.

How can I start with this....

The beginning of the animation-

I thought in the beginning your animation was nice. Their were some nice little effects and gags in their as well. Then came that part where a cliff rises from the middle of the screen. It looked very unrealistic and its where the animation began to lack.

Then came the rest of the animation. You showed extreme laziness because the FBF in the stick figure became simply horrible. The sticks were all over the place using their proportion, and well...thats where I brought you down a few scores.

Puts some music in as well.

The idea? well, totally unoriginal. If I had a .000001 dollars for ever The Cliff animation, I'd be BillGates.

2/5.

Stormwrath responds:

Thats abit harsh but i guess constructive criticism always help, and i definatly see your point. Though i have no clue what "FBF" is, and the unoriginal idea..Well i guess sometimes making simple, light minded flash movies can be mildly amusing.

Thanks.

[shroogy the alien prequil]

Horrible.

This sucks.

Innxhll

I understand your new. BUT COULD YOU spend more than 5 days on an animation? Look at the score? Do you like it? Do you think its good? Have some self-respect.
This looks like it took mabye 2 hours. It needs more work.

Everyone:

IT WAS 5 SECONDS! You guys need help, and lots of it.

Music:
Sucked so bad. My ears hurt. Plus, it had nothing to do with the animation. Use the audio portal for godssake.

ICanDraw:

Could you suck anymore? I mean c'mon. This sucks, if you can't see that, quit flash.

SkilledBrush:

Your my friend :)
I don't want to hate you or anything. But why are you working for these losers? Plus, what did you write?

Your skills should be used somewhere where people can put them to good use.

So Ignxhll and ICanDraw, good job for making another unfunny, badly animated, horrible music, short, stupid animation.

Go on, make another flash. If its spam, people on the BBS will just hate you more.

lgnxhll responds:

also the score is better than "your" damn turkeys
and its a pilot
and shes my freind too and compliments my animating skills and
this is you being mad about me working with icandraw right
by the way my name isLGNXHLL dont forget it!

[History of Christmas]

Awesome

I love the idea. IT might be an awesome idea for a collab.
ALL i can say here is Awesome animation. Bad art.
In your flash Christmas Pee you had some nice art but bad animation. This is the opposite.
STill, I laughed liked crazy.

5/5.10/10

Icandraw responds:

thanks :D

[Christmas Pee]

All I can say

All I can say is amazing art. Bad animation.
7/10.

I will rate 10/10 and 5/5 cause your cool!

Icandraw responds:

1 I am cool yeay :D
2 u say 7/10 but u gave 10 / 10 :D

[Lost on halloween]

Your a good......

Well this is all I can say
Art= Your a great artist. 9/10
Animation= Looked very unrealistic. 6/10
Story= I did not even get whats going on. 5/10

Overall- Nice flash that does need some work.
I will rate 5 but review 5

CyanSandwich responds:

thanks for the review. i agree- the story and animation could have been better if I spent more time on it