Farza's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Sketch Collab 2010]

Meh.

It was simply a bunch of bad Animation that were nothing but scriblles.
The only parts that were good were FredMaster's and MarkSW.

[The Game Trailer Collab]

Epic.

Its great, what more can I say. You guys were awesome to work with :)

Archawn responds:

Awww Shucks

[jumping turtles]

Turtleco.

Time cops 2 is the best movie ever

Really awesome movie.

turtleco responds:

yes, yes it is.

[Ninja collab 2!]

I'm gonna....

My god. This is not a collab. Its a bunch of horrible animations tied together. This whole collab showed no effort AT ALL. You might as well call it Spam.

None of the parts were funny or animated nicely. Why? Can't you see? Characters losing proportions, people going crazy with the brush tool. Its all just bad.

People in the collab couldn't make a jump animation without losing their patience.

Sounds.
You guys need musical help, some parts had sound, other didn't. It got annoying.

I really don't know what else to say...a collab is something you put TIME and EFFORT into. I looked through all the animator's submissions. Sorry to say, but I would give the same score to ALL of them. So please pend more time on it.

Tell me animators, when you saw this animation, were you proud it? You guys have to have some respect for yourslef and your flashes. Get your act together. If your serious about flash, at least LOOK LIKe your serious through your flashes. If your not serious, your just another Blam of The Day.

lgnxhll responds:

your probly right but it was a fun to work with other animators and i guess we learned from our mistakes, correct?

[Music Lovers 2]

Needs more.

Pretty nice. But mega annoying.

Art:
It was actually pretty nice. Better than your usual. The 5 points is for the art.
All I can say about it mabye work more on making everything except the Chicken move more. The others were pretty boring since they had hardly any movement.

Music:
ANNOYING. You gotta learn to pick nice catchy music for flashes like these cause if the music sucks , the flash sucks. The music should sync with 2 things. The flash and the viewer. Which it did not.

Glitches:
The buttons are extremely glitch. They don't even work. I had to right click and press " Play".

Overall:

It was a Meh movie. Could have been way better. 2/5. 8/10.

Icandraw responds:

thank u for ur review

[Waiting for the Bus 2]

Meh.

My score, is for the animation and comedy of this flash. 8/10

Animation

Amazingly perfect! You've come a long way man. I used to hate these little stick figure animations you came up with. But lately I've been loving them. The art is perfect. It flows great and it seems each frame was worked on with heart.

Comedy

This is where I'm bringing you down. The credits made me laugh way more than the actual animation. And thats never sup-post to happen.

Voices

God! who comes up with these voices? Their perfect! I would love if you could tell me who did the voices? I would love it if you could respond to this and tell me who did the voices.

[Sticks On A Cliff]

Well.

How can I start with this....

The beginning of the animation-

I thought in the beginning your animation was nice. Their were some nice little effects and gags in their as well. Then came that part where a cliff rises from the middle of the screen. It looked very unrealistic and its where the animation began to lack.

Then came the rest of the animation. You showed extreme laziness because the FBF in the stick figure became simply horrible. The sticks were all over the place using their proportion, and well...thats where I brought you down a few scores.

Puts some music in as well.

The idea? well, totally unoriginal. If I had a .000001 dollars for ever The Cliff animation, I'd be BillGates.

2/5.

Stormwrath responds:

Thats abit harsh but i guess constructive criticism always help, and i definatly see your point. Though i have no clue what "FBF" is, and the unoriginal idea..Well i guess sometimes making simple, light minded flash movies can be mildly amusing.

Thanks.

[stick animation]

Nice. Shows power.

Well, my rating is based the animation. Which was awesome. You went a little crazy with the brush tool in the beginning but then you brought yourself back with that awesome running, Kamehameha, and effects animation.

By effects I mean the time the stick figure hit the floor, their was awesome detail at the wind and dust that flew around him.

I'm glad you didn't put sound in. It would've made it look shorter then it already is.

But don't post up animation on NG unless their done and done right. This definitely shows you got awesome potential to make these little battle scenes. Once you replace the stick figures with people in this animation and make it maybe 30 seconds longer, it will get you a nice score and awesome reviews.

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